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Welcome to the world of a secret romantic. Interesting individuals gifted me the backbone of the stories which wrote themselves. I have, of course, tweaked them the way my imagination would allow. Though years were lost, I plan to catch up with time now. The urge to bring the beauty of the time gone by is too strong! Enjoy!! Ajay P.S.:A comment with your views at the end of the blog will be appreciated.

Friday, 5 October 2018

The Wait


He looked through the powerful binoculars across the two rows of barbed wire fencing. He never could stop marveling at the vast stretch of grassland on the other side, similar to the landscape on his side of the border.

This is what the two countries had fought for? For so long? Surely, they had not fought for the land because they had so much of similar land on their side. No! it must have been something else! He could never understand the hostilities between the two countries. They had similar lad, similar people, and similar cultures and shared the same history.

Fortunately, the hostilities were now a thing of the past. There was still no love lost between the neighbors, but the sustained warring was almost forgotten. To the extent that whenever he came across a patrol party of the soldiers of the other side, they would nod at each other. Not yet at the stage that they exchanged pleasantries, but definitely better!

He had not been around at the height of hostilities. He had heard stories! Horrible tales of parties going across the border to capture isolated groups of soldiers who happened to be less wary or less equipped at that particular time, to bring them back to their side.

The lucky ones got shot. The less lucky ones were tortured before being sent-off to the cities as prisoners. It was rumored that only a few were taken prisoners, the bulk died during the torture and simply vanished. The capturing was not limited to the enemy soldiers. The local civilian population, mainly poor goatherds were not spared either. Very few ended up as intruders. The soldiers had their fun, tortured them if they were in the mood, and then let them go if they survived.

Thankfully, all that was in the past! Over the last few years, barely a shot was fired. This stretch of the border had lost its importance, or perhaps the powers had discovered that no real advantage was available to either side and status quo had been achieved. Thank God for that!

His sweeping graze stopped. As usual, she was there. With her goats and all! She was a sight he had become used to. Every day, without fail, she would be there with her goats. He had become so used to the sight of her, he did not know how he would react if she failed to appear one day. Over the years, he had noticed that she had not changed. She had the same slim, strong build, dark complexion, not very tall, but even her ragged dress could not hide her graceful persona.

For a long time, she would not come close enough to the border to allow him to have a clear glimpse of her face. He had somehow formed a mental picture of how she looked, but that was all imagination. Over the years, she had become less wary and had brought her goats closer to the fences. All she would do was cast quick furtive glances across, never long enough to let him get a good look at her. It had become like a standing challenge for him. When at the end of the day he failed it made his resolve stronger for the coming day.

It became a sort of a game for him. He would try all sorts of tricks to bring her closer. He would throw across small articles, combs, mirrors, toffees, even some money (even though his money was useless across the border!). He would burst crackers, get into a song and dance routine, and generally make a fool of himself….yet nothing worked. She would wander close enough to raise his hopes but would stop far enough from the fence so as to not allow him to get a good look.

The other unit members had a good laugh at his antics. They often would jokingly exhort him to go across and drag her back to his side – like in the old days! He did not take kindly to such suggestions, even though these were made in jest. He was not a criminal; he was an army man and a proud one at that! She was not a prize that he had to win. It was a relationship he could not define and others could not decipher.

The patrol party members changed periodically. His story was passed on from the old ones to the newer ones. They all knew about his madness. Over a period of time, they let him be. Since there was really not much to do in this back of beyond, he would become the target of his team members’ fun, once in a while.

 

Then one day she deigned to come closer to the border. It was impossible that she would not have noticed this particular man had been continuously watching her, doing things to attract her attention. He got a look of her face from the side. Once she looked towards them, he noticed that she had three small tattoo dots on her chin.

The tattoos made him recall that his mother and his aunts used to sport such tattoos – but that was years ago. The fashion belonged to a generation gone by – new fashion trends had replaced this even in the rural areas. But this woman sported the tattoos even now.

Strange!

He could not put a finger on her age with any accuracy. She could have been nineteen or twenty, or she could have been older. She must be older. He had been around for four years now. She looked as old when he first saw her through his binoculars. She had not changed a bit. Some of these rural women were like that. Maybe it was the pollution free air. And, the pure water…!

Then over the months she would come even closer to the fence. The enemy patrol party sometimes passed by while she was grazing her goats. They always ignored her. Maybe they were busy keeping a watch on his buddies. She did not matter. She was on the right side of the fence and hence did not matter. There were no real hostilities but still they kept an eye on the other.

 

Over the months, she would come even closer to the fence and then she would look at him directly. No, she was not looking at him, but actually beyond him. She was looking at his team members – scanning their faces. He felt a little disappointed. What did they matter? He had been looking out for her over so many years and she was looking at his mates!

Yet he was happy that she was there. He looked forward to seeing her there. At least, she was quite openly looking at them. Naturally, without any bashfulness or hesitation; that had to be a good sign. He tried to make conversation but she never replied.

Sometimes she would look at him and a ghost of a smile would appear. Maybe that was his imagination playing games. For she always appeared aloof and disinterested. He tried to throw across some small gifts but she always ignored them. They were left lying where they fell. He could not stop trying. What he wanted from her – he was not sure. He just wanted her to respond.

Then one day an older guy was sent as a replacement in his team. Rather a rough looking and crude character! Hardly had he arrived, he started making fun of his teammates. Making fun of them as sissies, saying that they were having it easy, no gunfire, no danger, and no fun – what was the point of their presence. The other unit members were not happy with his remarks but he had the reputation of being somewhat of a brute. Got into fights and he looked tremendously strong. The sort of person, who enjoyed getting into fights, enjoyed picking fights. They tried to ignore him as best as they could.

In the evening, they were all drinking except the people on patrol. The brute went on a storytelling trip. The stories were not funny but rather sadistic. Apparently, he had been posted here years ago when there were regular skirmishes. Firing across the border was a routine occurrence.

Most of the stories were about soldiers they captured. The tortures were described in gory detail. They tried to change the topic but he sneered at them and reverted right back to his stories.

He made insulting remarks. He was quite drunk but the others were not. Though drinking was a regular evening pastime, none of them was enjoying it today. In the confined area of the bunker complex, there was no way to avoid him.

Suddenly, he launched into a story of how he and three of his mates had once abducted a couple from across the border. The way they had tortured them. He was particularly proud of the look of terror he saw in the eyes of the man. The woman, the bitch…….remained defiant!!!!

He tried all he could do to subjugate her spirit, he tried all atrocities on her, but he could not break her.

But, he got her in the end!

He saw the look of pain and of terror in the eyes of the man as he tortured the woman. That is what he used to break her. He smiled at the woman and gouged out the eyes of her lover right in front of her. How they screamed! And screamed and screamed till it got on his nerves.

More than anything, he shot them to get rid of the screams!

The ugly nauseating tale was disgusting for all but the man was laughing! He was laughing!

What was he? Man or beast? They had enough! One by one, each of them stepped outside. The sight of the brute was nauseating!!

Next morning the spirits in the camp were low. Last night had cast a shadow on their boring but routine life. They could not figure out how they would spend the days with the brute. They all sat at their post trying to avoid conversation.

He was particularly worried about the girl today. Her presence would set off the brute and he did not want that to happen. For the first time he was hoping that she would not appear. If the brute said anything, he would forget his fears and kill him. He was determined about that.

But appear she did. Against all his hopes, she came closer to the fence than ever before. The entire party was tense. They all knew how he felt about her. They saw the desperation and the resolve in him. Each one of them resolved to stand with him, in case the brute started something.

Somehow, sensing this the brute looked at the girl but kept quiet. He just stared at her, saying nothing.

The girl came right up to the fence. He tried to shoo her away. But she came right up to the fence staring fixedly at the brute. It seemed that no one else existed. He tried to get her attention but she had eyes only for the brute. Time seemed to have come to a standstill.

Then she turned towards him and smiled. For the first time! Ever. Then, she turned and walked away.

He was relived!

That day the brute was unusually subdued. He sat and drank all evening by himself. No laughing, no sneering of the previous night. But the atmosphere was tense.

That night they all went to bed early. Most were relieved.

In the morning he was woken up roughly by the night patrol party. Still groggy, he could not understand what had happened to cause the commotion, but one look at the man told him like nothing else that something was very wrong! He followed the man outside.

Then he saw it. It was the body of the brute. He was lying face down. He turned the body over. He felt bile rising in his throat. The brute was cut all over. His eyes had been gouged out. It was result of a torture, the likes of which, they had not seen in their entire life.

Who could do it? With so many other people in such a small area! It did not appear possible. It was a mystery, that it was! They had to arrange things first. Arrange for post mortem, file reports, transport the remains……. the day passed in a blur!

Next morning, he was at his post. Maybe the sight of the girl would ease his tense nerves.

True to form, she appeared. She walked right up to the fence and gave him a sweet smile.

He smiled back. He was so happy, he could not think of a thing to say.

Then she brought out a small newspaper packet from the folds of her dress. She looked at it once and with all the force she could muster threw it across the fence towards him. She had underestimated the force of her throw so the packet sailed over his head.

He got up to retrieve it.

What gift could she offer him when she had already offered him her smile?

He picked up the packet and tore it open.

The gouged out eyes of the brute stared back at him!

In shock, he turned around.

There was no girl………only miles and miles of grassland!